Don't worry, there won't be a regeneration anytime soon in this verse. Honestly, I've only seen a couple of episodes of S5, and I'm far, far more comfortable writing Ten than Eleven. Considering that this is my verse where I call the shots, there won't be a regeneration for a very long while... :)

I didn't have Martha and Donna ambush him because they had already gotten the whole story from Gemma. However, what would you have liked to have seen? There's always room for an outtake, and it would be really fun to have the two women confront him as to what exactly he was doing in that alleyway... *g*