Please--please--tell me we won't be waiting a month for Chapter 14. Even if it's a lie. Pretty please.
Brilliant. I had to force myself to slow down--to pay attention to the gorgeous detail you provided in the chapter, rather than skipping straight for the end and--FINALLY--the Doctor and Rose running into each other. You're masterful at building suspense, at setting this driving feeling to the story without making it hurried, rushed, or forced; even now, adrenaline is making my hands shake, all as a result of reading this fine bit of work.
Oh, this was just wonderful. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Brilliant. I had to force myself to slow down--to pay attention to the gorgeous detail you provided in the chapter, rather than skipping straight for the end and--FINALLY--the Doctor and Rose running into each other. You're masterful at building suspense, at setting this driving feeling to the story without making it hurried, rushed, or forced; even now, adrenaline is making my hands shake, all as a result of reading this fine bit of work.
Oh, this was just wonderful. I look forward to the next chapter.